Working with my critical friend

Today Room 5 and Room 6 did some writing and we had to  find out how does your critical help you? and How does the rubric help you with your writing. Me,Juliano and Joshua we were thinking about the question it was really challenging but we manage to find the answer. The question was how does a critical friend help you? Well we all said that a critical friend helps you improve on your writing and makes you fix any that wrong or that could tell what you did right.

Science at tech

Today Room 5 and Room 6 went to Tech. After the year 8's did digital Tech we went to science for the first time. I was really existed we split into 2 classes and started to learn about things we didn't really know about the things such as the physical world. I got really confused doing science I didn't know what to do our teacher from science her name was Miss Bunts she was a really kind teacher that tought us so many stuff and next we were going to learn 2x the learning then this week. At the end of the day we had a little challenge if you got it right you would get a chocolate. I really loved science I hope that we learn a lot more.

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