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Thursday 13 March 2014

This is my poem on I am the sea











I am the sea
I am very long and I have salt water
inside of me.

When the moon comes
out my water is shiny and
beautiful with colors circling around
me.

 When people come in the water
 with me I'm joyful with lots
of kids playing with
me.

When you come in my sea you will  shiver and shake.
I am joyful in the sea
with sea creatures swimming with me.

      

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Hey Raymond
Well done! Your poem is joyful to read. I picture myself wanted to go for a peaceful swim as I read this.Great use of describing words. Keep up the good work.

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