My Wall Wisher on what I know about war by Raymond

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I have learnt that there are a lot of people dieing for they country`

Raymond,Patrick & Lathams Current Event

Residents flee Happy Valley scrub fire

There was a large scrub fire in Wellington which threatened 30 houses and 70 residents had to evacuate their homes.  The residents were sent to Happy Valley school to keep safe until they could return back to their homes.

Three helicopters with monsoon buckets were sent to fight the fire and put it out.

The police and the firefighters know that somebody started the fire on purpose.

I think that it would be very scary how the fire would come close to our house.  I think the person that started the fire is really bad because they could have killed a lot of people.

                                         

All About me By Raymond

Hi my name is Raymond.
I am 10 years old and my teacher is Miss Paton.
This is my second year in room five.
In my spare time time I like to go on Maths whizz, Sumdog and study ladder.
My favourite foods are corned beef and rice.
My favourite movie is Real Steel.
Over the holidays I went to Melbourne, Perth and Western Australia. In Room 5 I would like to move up writing levels.

My narrative about the old lady

                   
One cloudy day an old lady named Suzy went for a walk in the park. When the old lady came back, she went for a nap in her house. When it was night time an enormous intoxicated man came running across the street. He stopped when he saw a laptop, Ipod touch, Iphone and lots of money on the table. He grabbed a crowbar from the corner of her house and yanked the door open. The man thought in his mind “Goody”.

The man went inside and stole everything on the table. It was all worth $1000. He took off as fast as the wind. When the lady woke up she was mad and she shouted across the room “WHO HAS STOLEN  MY  STUFF?”.
She called the Police and said in her terrified      voice “Someone has robbed me. Please come quickly because they might come back”.
The Policeman told her to live in a hotel while they sorted out the robbery in her house.  
She agreed so the Police took her to the nearest hotel and made sure she was comfortable.

When she walked into the hotel she was amazed because there were other old ladies there. They were all in a similar situation and  had all been victims of crime .


Later, back at the crime scene, the Policemen heard someone or something playing music in the bush. They looked behind the bush and hiding in the leaves was the enormous intoxicated man. He got up and ran as fast as a cheetah in the other direction, so the Police knew that this would be a mission.

The police surrounded the area of the trees and bushes and soon he came running out. The man was arrested for being in the possession of the old ladies stuff. The Policemen returned all the goods that the old lady owned. They smiled as they drove away,  ‘Red Wine’ by UB40 was blasting out from her ipod touch.

The End


                                                                                          

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